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by Zeek
Tue 30 Apr 2024, 10:51
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

On PDF page 37 it says “they see these the neuroscapes behind their eyes.” On p. 40 it has “People listen to music on Walkman’s.” There shouldn’t be an apostrophe there. It also says “and their are still relatively few satellites” which should be “and there are still…” On p. 41 it gives a name as “L...