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by paladin-neil
Mon 22 May 2023, 17:44
Forum: General
Topic: Davokar Awakens Beta Feedback
Replies: 20
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Re: Davokar Awakens Beta Feedback

few more:

p112 - 'seeds and cutlings' - should be 'cuttings'
p113 - 'front and rear [...] of the hull reaches out' - should be 'reach'
p135 - 'ordered the establishment a more prominent position' - should be OF a more prominent position
p140 - margin text 'ViWe assume that' - Typo, delete 'vi'
by paladin-neil
Sun 21 May 2023, 18:58
Forum: General
Topic: Davokar Awakens Beta Feedback
Replies: 20
Views: 7284

Re: Davokar Awakens Beta Feedback

p24: 'the cauldron belongs to Vouax' - word spacing could be improved p46: 'two attacks with damage 1d12' and 'two attacks with damage 1d8' from the wave and debris. As damage taken by a PC, shouldn't this be a fixed amount, not a dice roll? p50: 'come and go as he pleases' - should 'pleases' be 'pl...