let me just say how excited i am about the latest kickstarter updated, not only for the content it presents, but mostly because it shows that you are listening to backer feedback and are actually making adjustments to give use the game we'd like to see. i think expanding the skill list is a good ide...
with "Mage" broken into 3 entries and each given equal weight to the other professions, you are 3 times as likely to be a mage as you are to be any other profession.
perhaps give mage one entry, roll d10, and introduce a nested d3 table for the type of mage?
Inconsistant longbow damage p. 16 (Critical Hit): critical hit damage for a longbow is 2d12, leading me to believe longbow damage is 1d12, but Orla Moonsilver (pregen Hunter) has a longbow who's damage is 2d6. Also, p. 17 (Death Roll) "... you must make a death roll – a roll against you Constit...
looking at the skills for the pregen characters, im confused by how skills work. Bastonb's Strength is 18 and Axes (str) is 7. he's strong, but not to good with a strength based skill? what is the relationship between skills and attributes?
Naming a resource after the attribute it derives from (ie Willpower and Willpower Points) may be a bit confusing. also, you don't have Constitution and Constitution Points.
i have a question about the dice pool. page 20 suggests the source of each die for the die pool is inconsequential, and the example on page 21 supports this by making no distinction between attribute, skill or gear dice, but page 1 of the introduction says you need dice of 3 different colors. The in...
page 75, critical stress effects (human) #4 "and the row could even turn violent." [emphasis mine] is this a typo, or am i just missing the meaning or "row?" Sidenote. row (pronounced to rhyme with now) is a non-American synonym for fight or argument. Confusing to Americans, may...
page 78, Drowning
this may be regional or language thing, but "This roll is not an action and is made at your turn before you perform your action."
"on your turn" sounds better.
page 75, critical stress effects (human) #4
"and the row could even turn violent." [emphasis mine]
is this a typo, or am i just missing the meaning or "row?"