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by Amraphel
Tue 19 Mar 2024, 14:58
Forum: Loremaster's Only
Topic: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback
Replies: 94
Views: 3875

Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

On p. 179 (which is page 183 of the PDF), in section 2992 — THE JAWS CLOSE, we are told in the final paragraph that Balin “established a throne … and was acclaimed Lord of Moria”. However, on the same page, in the box titled A TALE OF YEARS OF BALIN’S REIGN, it says that “Balin is crowned Lord of Mo...
by Amraphel
Mon 29 Jan 2024, 13:27
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Hello @ur_friend_nate! My understanding of the Hope loss rule is as follows. Hope would be decreased by 3: i.e. you lose one point for each dice showing a 1 in the pool after all the rolling and re-rolling is over. You only lose Hope if you push the roll, not whenever you happen to roll a 1. Similar...
by Amraphel
Thu 25 Jan 2024, 13:27
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 22, Talents Fencer gives +2 dice to close combat rolls “when fighting with any kind of melee weapon”. Knifeman gives the same bonus but only when fighting with a knife. A knife is surely a kind of melee weapon … so Knifeman seems rather redundant (except in terms of flavour). Fencer is also a c...
by Amraphel
Sat 13 Jan 2024, 22:12
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 13, final section: the abbreviation ’90s ought to have an apostrophe, not a single opening quote mark (i.e. rather than —the difference may be hard to see, depending on your font). There is one occurrence in the paragraph that has neither, but it ought to have an apostrophe too.
by Amraphel
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 21:50
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 12, Drama, Horror & Personal Growth box, final paragraph, second sentence: “What happens on the road highlight and perhaps answer the questions…” should read “What happens on the road highlights and perhaps answers the questions…”
by Amraphel
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 17:26
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 7, section A LINGERING HOPE, final paragraph, final sentence reads “…you need to careful not to let the bliss inside drawn you…” but should read “…you need to be careful not to let the bliss inside draw you…”
by Amraphel
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 17:23
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183450

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 6, section STRANGE EVENTS, first sentence: "…suspect of serving…" should read "…suspected of serving…”
by Amraphel
Thu 05 Oct 2023, 20:27
Forum: GM Only
Topic: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback
Replies: 35
Views: 11459

Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Sometimes, the word “mission” in "Great Mother Mission” is capitalised, and sometimes it isn’t. See, for example, section 2180-2183 on page 23, where both variants appear. I think this also qualifies as a nitpick :D
by Amraphel
Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:48
Forum: GM Only
Topic: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback
Replies: 35
Views: 11459

Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Page 19, section 2184-2186: “… they launch an offense to …” should read “… they launch an offensive to …”

Page 25, section 2186: same issue
by Amraphel
Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:43
Forum: GM Only
Topic: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback
Replies: 35
Views: 11459

Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Page 18, section 2147-2151: “Alexandria succeeds from the 3WE” should read “Alexandria secedes from the 3WE”

Page 25, section 2147: same issue