On p. 179 (which is page 183 of the PDF), in section 2992 — THE JAWS CLOSE, we are told in the final paragraph that Balin “established a throne … and was acclaimed Lord of Moria”. However, on the same page, in the box titled A TALE OF YEARS OF BALIN’S REIGN, it says that “Balin is crowned Lord of Mo...
Hello @ur_friend_nate! My understanding of the Hope loss rule is as follows. Hope would be decreased by 3: i.e. you lose one point for each dice showing a 1 in the pool after all the rolling and re-rolling is over. You only lose Hope if you push the roll, not whenever you happen to roll a 1. Similar...
Page 22, Talents Fencer gives +2 dice to close combat rolls “when fighting with any kind of melee weapon”. Knifeman gives the same bonus but only when fighting with a knife. A knife is surely a kind of melee weapon … so Knifeman seems rather redundant (except in terms of flavour). Fencer is also a c...
Page 13, final section: the abbreviation ’90s ought to have an apostrophe, not a single opening quote mark (i.e. ’ rather than ‘—the difference may be hard to see, depending on your font). There is one occurrence in the paragraph that has neither, but it ought to have an apostrophe too.
Page 12, Drama, Horror & Personal Growth box, final paragraph, second sentence: “What happens on the road highlight and perhaps answer the questions…” should read “What happens on the road highlights and perhaps answers the questions…”
Page 7, section A LINGERING HOPE, final paragraph, final sentence reads “…you need to careful not to let the bliss inside drawn you…” but should read “…you need to be careful not to let the bliss inside draw you…”
Sometimes, the word “mission” in "Great Mother Mission” is capitalised, and sometimes it isn’t. See, for example, section 2180-2183 on page 23, where both variants appear. I think this also qualifies as a nitpick