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by 9lives
Thu 07 Mar 2024, 06:34
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Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

The diagram on pg 143 has a disconnected #13 on the map with no description.
There is no 6b labeled on the map.
The C for 6c is not clear.
by 9lives
Tue 05 Mar 2024, 21:02
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Found a Type-o on pg 129 under the Tarloch background paragraph He searched, his torch flickering and fading, and found a door that no-one had opened in a thousand years. With his father’s sword, he prised it open — and saw, beyond, the shadow. Durin’s Bane. Should it say "he pried it open"
by 9lives
Tue 05 Mar 2024, 17:03
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Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

Hi

Found another sentence that doesn’t make sense.

Pg 159 in the wailing stairs paragraph

The Stairs are the safest route to the mines currently extant, so Malech uses the stair to send Slave labourers down to dig;
by 9lives
Mon 04 Mar 2024, 17:01
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Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

Hello. The big map at the first page of the book. There are 2 #13's for the High Cistern. One where is actually is and the duplicate is below the words "The Road". I think it's supposed to be #14 The Gatehouse.
by 9lives
Sun 03 Mar 2024, 18:16
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Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

Hi. Pg 140
6. The chamber of narvi

Type o in first paragraph.

Narvi was accomplished in other crafts, too — in stone working, in the sciving of runes.

Should say scribing.