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by Caleb
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 15:43
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
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Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

Page 6, last sentence of the third paragraph; “deer in the headlights or Armageddon”. “Or” should be “of”.
by Caleb
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 15:10
Forum: General
Topic: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Replies: 40
Views: 183761

Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4

On page 4, in the last sentence before the gameplay example, “interiority of the self each of you answer this” it feels like there is a missing punctuation mark between “self” and “each”.