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Caleb
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 15:43
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The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
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Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
Page 6, last sentence of the third paragraph; “deer in the headlights or Armageddon”. “Or” should be “of”.
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Caleb
Thu 11 Jan 2024, 15:10
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The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
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Re: The Electric State Alpha PDF Feedback - Chapters 1, 3, 4
On page 4, in the last sentence before the gameplay example, “interiority of the self each of you answer this” it feels like there is a missing punctuation mark between “self” and “each”.
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