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Reading through the scenario, I spotted two things (I'm using the updated Quickstart pdf): The text mentions that the prospectors have disapeared 3 days ago, but the handout mentions 5 days. Most likely a typo the Structure scan handout does not contain the levels of Blight I think there's a note i...

Random thought: I don't think there's anything in the adventure that would tell the PCs the backstory of the place, is there? So the title of the adventure never makes sense to players.

Defence ramblings - Burning an action on spec is a particularly offputting proposition when you only have one action per turn. (Though it's yet to be clarified whether a basic move is a free action. I think it is.) What players dislike most is loss of agency, so they want to be able to do something ...

Thanks for the updated downloads!

Psst, on Messima's character sheet, the Burglar talent should be Driver. (Forgot to mention before.)

Comments on the adventure. - Handout 4 text: correct Registred to Registered. - State explicitly what a marker is, with reference to the scan map. We don't know. - System quantities are normally given in numerals - there's no need to list it as a word ('four') as well, and it adds confusion. This ap...

Having read through the rules part, a few quick comments. - It really needed another copyedit/proofread - there are a lot of fixes. I think you were in a hurry to get it out to us, which is a good reason! - Maybe say a bit more clearly what the Bird -is-. (Because players will ask.) That can have un...

Additional note on 'module' - it was a common term in the Elder Days of roleplaying, so it may seem familiar, but it's not in common use now so it might be best not to assume a shared understanding. For instance, in section 1, if you changed the first 'module' to 'supplement' (or supplementary mater...

Looking good!

I wonder whether it would help to define 'Module', as the whole agreement depends on it.

In general, assume common sense applies. 2. That would be weird. The Pierce bonus is to get you closer to the threshold for a Piercing Blow. So for spears, this (and Fend Off) is where they pay off as a choice of weapon. 4. If you're engaged in close combat, you can't be in Rearward stance. I'd prob...

Oh, following up re p45: the term 'crippled' is generally seen as offensive by the disabled community, so an alternative might be wise. (And from the character write-up, Cunning might be a better fit anyway.)

Also in Ivoch's Horrible Strength, should be scores not scored.